Mayan

On the weekend after my meeting with my editor Kate, I wrote to Diane, my agent, updating her on the discussions:

I had my meeting with Kate on Thursday and I agreed to change and simplify The Moses Tablets...

My only concern is about the possible loss of the Summer release slot. I firmly believe that the summer slot is ideal, followed by the spring slot.  On the other hand I obviously need more time (guaranteed in writing), given how late we have come to this decision.  Kate was talking about a January 2012 slot, but this is less than ideal.  If it was a hardback, I wouldn’t mind a November 2011 slot.  But it isn’t and as for January (or even February), I see them as little more than graveyards.

The question is what can I do to make a summer slot attainable?  Certainly, I can write a first draft in 6-8 weeks once the plot is finalized and the research done. In fact I am quite far with my research, as much of the old research can still be carried over.  But I still have to finalize the plot.  I reckon I may be able to do that by the end of the week. and then finish the research by the end of September.  This gives me two months to write it by the end of November deadline for a summer release (if I have understood correctly).

I will only know for sure when I have completed a more detailed plot summary.  If I manage that by the end of the week, then I can do the rest, including delivering by the end of November.

Kate said that she would send us a summary of our discussions on Monday, so you may be reading that at the same time as this.

Diana agreed with me that a summer publication slot was desirable and wrote to Kate accordingly, while I got on with the task of writing a two page synopsis based on my discussions with Kate.  I did not yet send it to Kate, as I wanted Diane’s feedback first.  I wanted to be sure that this story really hit the spot. I did however write to Kate, to sound her out on the idea of changing the male Mossad officer into a female.  The reason for this was that I wanted to two strong female characters in addition to the male protagonist, in order to heighten the tension.

Kate for her part sent me the summary of our discussions (our messages crossed over) and this helped me a great deal.  Not all of the things we discussed made it to the final cut.  But certain key elements were there that form the basis of the final story: a female archaeologist make a major find with ancient writing, a young Anglo-Jewish professor Daniel Klein called in to translate, background research into the archives of 19th century explorer William John Bankes, the Mossad, Daniel coming under suspicion of murder, a chase, a ruthless secret society, seeking historical information from the Samaritans.

By mid-day on Tuesday the 10th of August, I had finished my own preliminary draft of the synopsis, incorporating these key elements and sent it to Kate.  By the early evening, Diane wrote to me that she had spoken to Kate and they had agreed on a delivery deadline of the 1st of December, aiming for publication sometime in May or June.  This was perfect for me and it was clear that Diane and Kate shared the excitement.

The title that I had settled upon – The Moses Tablet(s) was a problem however.  Kate felt that it gave away too much too soon.  The other issue was my name.  The publishers felt that as this was a completely different genre to my other books, it should be published under a different name.  This was something I entirely agreed with.  But coming up with a new name could wait.  I had to crack on with polishing the synopsis.  By eight o’clock in the evening on August the 10th, I sent the synopsis to Kate.

Four days later, I wrote to Diane, suggesting that we call the book Shibboleth. Derived from the Hebrew word for an ear of corn, it has been incorporated into the English language as meaning “any distinguishing practice that is indicative of one’s social or regional origin. It usually refers to features of language, and particularly to a word whose pronunciation identifies its speaker as being a member or not a member of a particular group.”  The literal origin goes back to a war between different Israelite tribes when the tribe of Ephraim was defeated.  When fleeing members of the tribe of Ephraim tried to flee, they were challenged to say the word Shibboleth.  If they pronounced it Sibboleth (because of their inability to pronounce the consonant Sh) they were put to death on the spot.

In my story, this conflict did not play a direct part, but the ancestors of the tribe of Israelite tribe of Ephraim and their origins – as well as their inability to pronounce sh – played a major part.  But it was also the modern meaning of Shibboleth – a test of membership and faith – that gave it a pleasing double meaning.  I pointed out that even if most people didn’t  know the meaning, the same could be said of  Tesseract – a title of a very successful book by Alex Garland.

One day later – on the 15th of August 2010 – I commenced the actual writing of the book.

 

After a flurry of communications following the London Book Fair and my belated return from Israel (courtesy of the Icelandic volcanic ash cloud), some two months went by, without any indication of what I was supposed to be doing and now with all the proofreading and corrections done for the second Alex Sedaka book, I was in the uncomfortable position of not having anything to do.  True, I was supposed to be studying for my physics degree with the Open University.  But high blood pressure and dizzy spells – brought about by anxiety – were making that impossible.

No Way Out had gone on sale on the 10th of June and hopes were high because the publishers had got it into Tesco and Asda.  However, whilst it was selling better than Mercy, the question was whether it was selling enough to meet the publishers 20,000 copy target within a reasonable time?

In the absence of any word on the subject, I decided to force the issue. So on the 20th of June, I wrote to Diane telling her that in the absence of any indication from the publishers as to what they wanted I was going to continue writing the third Alex Sedaka book.  But being too cowardly to present this as an ultimatum, I explained my decision in conciliatory terms (or should that be weasel words) to the effect that “I don’t want to be in a position where they decide they want it and I have to start from near the beginning.”

In retrospect it may have been a mistake to force the issue.  Had I not done so, the publishers might have waited longer before deciding.  But the upshot of all this was that on the 27th of June Diane told me that the sales – although better than for Mercy – were not quite good enough and that consequently HarperCollins had decided not to go ahead with the third Alex Sedaka book.  The good news was that they agreed,in principle, to my suggestion that I should do the Moses book rather than the Doomsday Labyrinth.  Of course all this was subject to agreement between me and Kate (my editor) on the plot for the Moses book.  And that had yet to be finalized.

There followed an exchange of eMails in which Kate and I struggled to find a suitable date to meet.  The problem was that Kate was going on holiday for a fortnight starting on August the 20th.  For my part, my sister was coming to visit for a week, taking up a chuck of the time before that.  In the event, we met on Thursday the 5th of August and came up with the rudiments of a plot.

The basically requirement was that there had to be an important discovery at the beginning, the hero trying to work out the full implications (which had to be major), people trying to stop the hero, a chase, an albino monk (only joking – but there did have to be some serious threat to the hero) and of course a final resolution of some sorts with a happy end.  Also one of the pursuers must be extremely vicious with a propensity not just for murder but for brutality.

This last point was something of a problem for me, because one of the things I had learned from my mother’s cousin Clive Donner (a celebrated film director in the sixties and seventies) was that one should always put a bit of good in ones bad characters and a bit of bad in ones good characters.  This Yin and Yang approach had served me in good stead when it came to keeping my characters realistic.  But perhaps it was actually holding me back in the commercial stakes.  So maybe Kate was right.  But it was uncomfortable for me to have to adapt my style to this extent.

However, I rose to the challenge and drew up a synopsis based on our discussions.  The one one remaining problem was the deadline.  Kate wanted to publish the book in January 2011, somewhat earlier than we had previously been talking about and well before the third Alex Sedaka book was due to have been published.  Given that we were already a week into August 2010, this left very little time for the writing of the book – especially as there was still some research to be done.  (I had in fact been reading up on ancient Egypt and especially the 18th Dynasty, but my reading was far from complete.)

The one that was not yet decided was the publication date.   When the third book in the contract was going to be an Alex Sedaka book, the delivery deadline was the end of August 2010 and publication had been scheduled for August 2011.  But now things had changed.  Here we were in the first week of August 2010 and I had yet to write a word of the new book, or even to have a full and detailed plot.

 

After Diane, my agent, dropped the bombshell on me that HarperCollins didn’t want to give me a separate contract for the conspiracy thriller books, I wrote back immediately voicing my concerns.  They had not ruled out a third book in the Alex Sedaka series, but whereas before it was a definite, now it was only a maybe – and I had already been working on the book in accordance with the previous understanding.

I pointed out to Diane that the time-frame was tight. The deadline for the third book was August whereas No Way Out was due to be published in June.  It was not clear whether the deciding factor for the publisher would be the actual sales figures of the second book or simply whether or not they managed to place it in the supermarkets.  This was one of the points that I asked Diane to clarify.

But in any case,  they told me last time (regarding Mercy) that the supermarkets only decide in the last few weeks.  So regardless of their yardstick for success of  No Way Out, I wouldn’t even know which book I was supposed to be writing until June and would then have to deliver it by August.  I pointed out to Diane that I could write a first draft in three months – yes, I am that good – but it would be cutting it fine.

I was being a bit mischievous here, as Diane had already implied that the deadline could be extended.  But there was a genuine underlying problem.  Diane had made it clear that if the publishers decided to go with a conspiracy thriller, they would aim for publication in February or March 2011.  Whereas if they wanted a third Alex Sedaka thriller, they would publish it in May 2011.

From my point of view, the other way round would have been better.   I had already fully developed the plot of the the third Alex Sedaka book and written some 15,000 words.  Also such a book required little or no additional research.  In contrast, I had yet to agree on even the plot/synopsis of the conspiracy book, let alone written a word of it.  Furthermore, the conspiracy thriller would require a fair amount of research.  Indeed, if it was to be the “end of the world” Mayan prophecy book, it would require a lot of research, as I knew virtually nothing about the subject.

This was the other point I wanted to get across to Diane – and to the publishers.  If the conspiracy thriller was to be the third book in the existing contract then there was no guarantee that it would go any further.  I wanted such a book to succeed.  But that meant that it had to be 100% the book I wanted to write – not the book I had agreed to write as a reluctant compromise.  And, as I explained to Diane, I was far more enthusiastic about a book centering on the Moses theme than anything about Mayan prophecies.  I put this in the most forthright terms:

Of the other two ideas, I infinitely prefer the MOSES TABLET to the DOOMSDAY LABYRINTH.  I only reluctantly came up with the Doomsday Labyrinth idea and haven’t even got enough material for it.  I would have to do masses of research into Mayan prophecies to flesh it out into a full length book, whereas with MOSES I could hit the ground running.  Furthermore, no matter how much research I do, DOOMSDAY LABYRINTH will come over as a rip off of several movies and just one more of an overworked fad, following the flock but totally lacking in originality.  It is the sort of project that I would happily write as a visual/action screenplay (it would take me all of two weeks),  but it is too “thin” in terms of content to be a book.

All this drama, I should add, was being played out against the backdrop of the volcanic cloud over Europe that was wreaking havoc with the airlines and had caused be to be stuck in Israel – at least for an extra day.  In any event, I was back the following day, and two days after that (24/04/2010) I followed up with a request that Diane obtain a formal agreement by the publisher to postpone the deadline.  I also took the opportunity to reiterate my firm conviction that if there was to be only one guaranteed conspiracy thriller, then it should be the Moses book.

If they DO want a conspiracy thriller as the third book, it should NOT be the Doomsday Virus.  Whilst the storyline has great Hollywood potential, I have – upon reflection – zero confidence in it as a book.  It will not sell.  I have discussed modifications of MOSES with Kate and incorporated some of her ideas into the story (e.g. finding the original ten commandments).  The other possibility is to take the third Alex Sedaka story, reset it entirely in England (except the opening scene) and have the SAS man on the run in the UK.  The emphasis would then be on the SAS man and the government trying to track him down.  At base it would be a chase-the-widget story, with the widget in question being the undeveloped film that the SAS man took off the photographer.

Whilst I continued working with my editor Kate on the final proofs and cover copy of No Way Out, I was still unsure of what I should be doing in the meantime regarding the third book, and indeed had  not been given any formal extension of the deadline.  I wrote again to Diane asking if I should be holding off until we got a firm decision from the publisher.  She told me that I should wait and that the publishers would decide on a basis of the early sales of No Way Out.  Specifically “they would really need to sell in 20,000 copies in order to consider Alex Sedaka worth continuing with.

The figure was clear enough, if not the time-scale.   But then again, they could probably tell in the first couple of weeks if it stood a reasonable chance of making that target.  Of course, there are such things as slow burners, at least for books sold through Waterstones and independent book shops.  But when the books are sold through supermarkets, it is different.  Supermarkets simply do not have time for slow burners.  If a book does not fly off the supermarket shelves, it will simply be returned very quickly and so any prospect of it becoming a slow-burner are effectively destroyed.

This was not a very comforting thought.  But at least it meant I would know my fate very quickly.

 

 

As I explained in the last installment of this, part of the drama surrounding the development of the Moses Legacy took place while I was on holiday in Israel in 2010.  In parallel with these discussions, the line editing and proof-reading of No Way Out was proceeding smoothly, complete with debates about whether a number between 200 and 300 could be described as ‘hundreds”.

Just to recap, my publishers liked the Doomsday Labyrinth but detected a small problem that it was too “boysy” and needed less physics and more archaeology – as well as a strong female lead.  At the same time, Diane (my agent) was still lobbying for the Moses book, pointing out that it already had a strong female lead as well as a generous helping of archaeology – they find the tablets of stone with the Ten Commandments for God’s sake!

At the same time, HarperCollins were officially committed to making the third book under the contract another Alex Sedaka book. Indeed they got me to send them the first two chapters so that they could include them as a sneak preview at the end of No Way Out.

I wrote a revised synopsis of Doomsday, fulfilling the “feminization” requirement <Wry Grin> and for her part, Kate (my editor) agreed to reconsider a shortened synopsis for the Moses book.  The idea was that if  I could reduce it to a one-page synopsis, then it would not be too complicated. (I know that sounds patronizing to the reader, but we live in the real-world – and writing is a business.)

Kate read it again, but was still not convinced.  She made it clear that it was not the idea of a story about Moses in principle that she objected to.  She just felt that the particular story that I had come up with didn’t work. She suggested a few idea to get the creative juices going such as finding that the Ten Commandments are different to what it says in the Bible or some Big secret surrounding Moses – something more shocking than the theory that he may have been an Egyptian prince.  She even suggested an alternative story in which the remnants of Noah’s Ark are discovered. Nevertheless, she agreed to present both the Doomsday Labyrinth and the Moses book, to the editorial committee.

With hindsight, Kate was almost certainly right about the Moses book needing a stronger twist.  The theory that Moses really was an Egyptian prince (and not just brought up as one) has been around since the time of Sigmund Freud.  Finding his bones and DNA to prove it, might be interesting in a nerdy sort of way, but it wouldn’t exactly be shocking.  And it is certainly not the sort of thing that people might kill to suppress.  However I wasn’t sure quite sure how to come up with something that was sufficiently surprising and yet at the same time credible.  I wrote back a couple of days later with an idea, but it was still undeveloped and not exactly earth-shaking:

I have been thinking of some ideas to make the MOSES TABLET bigger.  It STARTS with the discovery of the ten commandments in proto-semitic script.  This enables them to translate the script and thus gain access to other documents, leading them on a trail that leads them to the discovery of the BONES of MOSES in Petra, Jordan.  Remember that in the Old Testament, Moses wasn’t allowed to cross the River Jordan into Canaan?  Finding the bones of Moses (with a provable proto-semitic inscription on the coffin or tomb) would be a HUGE archeological find.  But certain interests would be opposed to it.
I would also make other changes, such as clandestine digging in Sinai in a military area that could lead to some tense moments in the story.
The story would then have:
– An exciting BEGINNING (finding the tablets with the ten commandments)
– An exciting MIDDLE (chases, clandestine digging, people trying to kill them)…       and
-An exciting END (finding the tomb of Moses and a final shootout).
I am sure that this would work.
The good thing about this story is that I could hit the ground running because of my existing knowledge of the Old Testament.

This was the best I could do for the time being.  I thought that as I was on holiday in Israel and both my agent and editor were at the London Book Fair, it would be enough at least to keep their minds open to the Moses idea, while I struggled to come up with a story that would be powerful as well as clever.  (Clever doesn’t cut it – I should have learned at primary school that no one loves a smart-ass.

However, on the 21st of April, 2010, Diane (my agent) sent me an eMail that sent me reeling.  It said:

On another note, we had a frank discussion about the conspiracy thrillers and she is reluctant to enter into a separate contract.  This is because she would like to see how NO WAY OUT performs.  If they can’t get the supermarkets on board for NO WAY OUT, they would not be interested in commissioning a third Alex Sedaka title, and instead would like to cut losses and have one of the conspiracy thrillers as the third title in our existing contract.  I can see the sense in this – if we’ve failed to get the supermarkets on board with Alex Sedaka twice, I can’t see how we are going to get them on board with a third novel and agree that we should cut our losses.

This was very different to their earlier reassurances that they wanted the third Alex Sedaka book.  The eMail went on to reassure me that:

If they did a third Alex Sedaka, they would want to do this in May next year.  There would be a slot for a conspiracy thriller in February / March.  Either gives you plenty of time to deliver so I can see that it is sensible to wait and see how we get on with NO WAY OUT in June before deciding on a way forward.

However there was no getting away from the fact that they were no longer committed to a third Alex Sedaka book, that they might want to make the conspiracy thriller the third book in the contract – depending on how well the second Alex Sedaka book did – and there was still no indication of which conspiracy thriller they wanted me to write.  Furthermore I remained less than enthusiastic about the Doomsday Labyrinth as a full-length book – although it would work fine as a screenplay.

Finally there was the small matter of the August deadline for submission of the third manuscript.  How was I going to meet it, if I had to wait until the publication of the second Alex Sedaka book in June before I even knew which manuscript I was going to write?

 

After Kate’s negative reaction to my original book proposals for the Moses Legacy and Phaistos Disk, in which she had suggested a few alternatives, I wrote to Diane, the same day, expressing my strong feelings on the subject:

Sorry for this long reply, but I have a lot to say.

 

Firstly, I am a bit disappointed that they didn’t go for the MOSES TABLET, especially after I put so much work into it – including after I submitted the draft (it is 106 short chapters)…

 

Furthermore, even if Dan Brown’s books centre around a simple premise, they expand into something more complicated – otherwise they wouldn’t run 500+ pages.  The MOSES TABLET could also be reduced to a sound bite summary – “Was Moses really an Egyptian prince?” – but like the Dan Brown books it expands into something more detailed in the telling.

 

Regarding the story suggestions, some of the ideas are more appealing than others:

 

1) The Turin Shroud is interesting, but it seems more like a scientific question and I can’t think of a way to get a story out of it.  But I’ll do some internet research and see if any ideas leap out at me.

 

2) The illuminati has been done before, by Dan Brown (Angels and Demons).

 

3) Secret Societies – Did you send them the PHAISTOS DISK?  Or only the MOSES TABLET and MARKED?  The reason I ask is that the PHAISTOS DISK is about secret societies ruling the world.

 

4) Noah’s Ark is a fascinating story.  (There is also an old Summarian Legend, which some say is the origin of the story.)  I could have a go at coming up with a story along those lines.  But it would need a modern tie-in, like people trying to gain access to a sensitive area in Turkey.  A former US astronaut was actually arrested in the Mount Arrarat region a few years ago and accused of espionage whilst searching for Noah’s Ark.  I’m not sure why Noah’s Ark is commercial but Moses isn’t – they’re both Old Testament Biblical figures and both are surely recognizable.

 

5) I don’t know much about the Mayan calender, but 2012 is the Olympic year and I see a possibility of a tie-in there.  However, given that I believe in rational explanations, I would have to make it a case of human beings trying to cash in on the legend either for gain or political terrorism.  (The latter is more topical and plausible.)

 

6) Stigmata.  It’s been done and I don’t really know how to spin a story out of it – at least not with a logical explanation.  (Well maybe a publicity stunt for a bogus medical breakthrough being pushed by a latterday snake-oil company.  But there’s plenty of that already, in the form if people offering Viagra over the internet.)

 

In conclusion then, the only ideas of those above that really inspire me at the moment are Secret Societies and 2012.  I will trawl the internet for more info on these and their other suggestions and try to come up with a story.  But I stand by my view that “Was Moses an Egyptian Prince?” is just as recognizable as “Was Noah’s Ark Real.”

 

However, not wanting to be stubborn, I decided to do a bit of online research and in the process I came across something that intrigued me.  So less than a quarter of an hour after sending Diane the above message, I wrote to her excitedly about my discovery:

I’ve just been looking up some things on the internet.  The next sunspot cycle is due to peak in 2012 – and is expected to be 30-50% stronger than the last peak.  If this were to coincide with a reversal of earth’s polarity (a real phenomenon every few tens of thousands of years) that could expose the earth to lethal radiation.

I don’t know if this one slipped under Diane’s radar, given my plaintiff appeals to her as a shoulder to cry on in my earlier – and somewhat longer missive – but she focussed on the long eMail when she wrote back two days later (26/02/10) with warm words that combined comfort with practicality.

At the time when I sent the eMail about the sunspot cycle, I didn’t yet have any clear story in my mind (even I take more than fifteen minutes;-).  However, during the course of a train journey, on the 26th of February, I got my head down and cobbled together a story centering around the Mayan calender and the belief that the world is coming to an end in 2012.  I typed it up and sent it to Diane that same evening, together with a sigh of relief that I had suddenly become highly enthusiastic about an idea that I been rather cool about only the day before.

Copyright (c) 2011 David Kessler


Physicist Dennis Mason dies suddenly at the site of a huge industrial project in Guatamala  The project involves drilling a hole through the earth’s crust and mantle down to the core, so as to extract pure iron for industrial use as well as thermal energy which can be converted to electricity and distributed throughout north and south America.

 

But the project is being built on sacred Mayan land, very close to an ancient Mayan temple and is opposed by the local people, especially central American Indians.  Indeed an old local, western educated,  Indian leader (calling himself “Itzamna” after a Mayan god), who is leading the resistance, has warned them that there is curse on those who defile the sacred ground.

 

Dennis Mason was the chief physicist of the project, as well as a shareholder in it.  Indeed the project was his baby.  He was the one who first calculated the feasibility of the project, selecting the location based on the thickness and composition of the earth’s crust and mantle at that point.  It was his calculations, and reputation as an elder statesman of physics that prompted governments and big business to back the project.

 

But now there is a vacuum in the personnel hierarchy, and David Sedaka – Mason’s star pupil – is called in to act as interim chief physicist, by project head Charles Sherry, until a permanent replacement can be found.

 

Meanwhile, the toxicology report from the post-mortem examination shows that Mason had traces of a rare snake poison in his body.  A follow-up examination of his body reveals no snake bites, but a tiny pinprick wound in his neck, which could be from a poison dart from a blow-pipe.  When eye-witness reports from frightened witnesses, confirm that Itzamna was seen running away from the scene – and even leaning over his body according to one witness – the self-styled “holy man” comes under intense suspicion and is arrested by local police.

 

In jail, Itzamna asks to see David Sedaka.  At first David is reluctant to meet him, but he eventually agrees and Itzamna tries to explain why 2012 will be the year of destruction based on old Mayan legends, but adds that it is not inevitable.  “The Gods do not destroy.  It is man who is the destroyer.”  David is on the verge of walking away from Itzamna’s “New Age bilge” as he calls it, when Itzamna admits that he went to meet Mason, but it was by pre-arrangement and at Mason’s instigation.  He says he went there, but found Mason dying.  Mason told him “you were right” and then died.  David is sceptical.  He asks how Mason could have even contacted him to arrange the meeting, given that Itzamna eschews modern technology.  Itzamna replied that Mason got a young local girl (K’in ich) to bring him the message.

 

David goes asking around in the local villages for K’in ich-il, but gets an angry response.  He is rescued/arrested by the local police chief who tells him that the girl is missing and that there is a lot of local resentment blaming the Americans.  He advises him to stay away from the villages.  He also tells David, that Itzamna probably knew the girl was missing and was simply cashing in on that to give himself a false alibi.

 

However, shortly after that K’in’s body is found.  The local Indians want to bury her quickly, but David persuades a local doctor to perform an autopsy.  The doctor says she has been tortured.  David asks if it could be the work of some sort of sadistic killer but the doctor shakes his head and says: “I have seen this kind of torture before.  This is not the random torture of a sadist.  This is the carefully controlled torture of some one who is seeking information.”

 

At Mason’s quarters – where David is staying – he asks the maid if Mason was troubled by anything, as Itzamna implied.  The maid says no, but that after his death, the house was ransacked.  David asks if anything was missing after that.  She says only his  laptop computer.  David logs on to Mason’s webmail and with some considerable effort, cracks his password.  He finds a file attached to a blank eMail. The file contains revised calculations showing that the drilling into earth’s iron core will cause a reversal of earth’s magnetic polarity preceded by a massive drop in earth’s magnetic field for a few years that will admit solar radiation.  Worse still, this will coincide with the peak of the next sunspot cycle in 2012, which is predicted to be 50% higher than the previous peak.  This will at minimum destroy telecommunications, plunging the planet into chaos.  At worst it will admit harmful solar radiation that will cause cancer and sickness and wholesale death and destruction.

 

David takes this information to Charles Sherry who tries to brush him off, telling him that we know too little about the causes of geomagnetic reversal (which occurs every few thousand years) to say what causes it or when.  He points out that the last one occurred in the time of homo erectus without destroying humanity or animal life.  But David says that this time it will coincide with an intense sunspot peak.  Sherry is still dismissive and then David realizes that Mason must have already told him.  David accuses Sherry of killing Mason. Sherry calls in his hatchet man to take “take this guy out the back.”

 

David runs and is now in danger from Sherry’s henchmen.  He is chased through a network of subterranean tunnels (part of the project).  He realizes that he is going deeper into the tunnels and his only chance is to sabotage the project and force an evacuation.  He gets to the control centre, where he is able to detonate the final blast that will break through to the earth’s core.  But he knows that if this is done before the bore hole has been lined with insulating material, the iron will melt the surrounding rock, cool off, solidify and seal the hole, making it impossible to re-open (because solid iron is harder to drill through than rock.

 

He is cornered by Sherry (the others are afraid to approach).  They fight it out.  Although David is younger, Sherry is crazed with anger and nearly wins.  But David manages to set off the explosion, causing the iron to start pouring up through the bore hole and causing violent local earth tremors.  As the fight continues, David is nearly pushed into the hole, but at the last minute, he turns the tables and send Sherry plummeting into the hole.  At the same time the iron is rising up and cooling off.  When Sherry hits the molten iron it cools even further, starts to solidify and the upward flow gradually slows down.  But the building is now in danger of collapsing and they have to evacuate.  They get out just in time.  But as a symbolic sign, the local Mayan temple survives the cataclysm and the locals converge there.

 

It was pure Hollywood and the climax was more than a little influenced (albeit subconsciously) by Total Recall.  (Maybe I was secretly thinking about a blockbuster movie already.)  Note also how I even smuggled in David Sedaka, the physicist son of lawyer Alex Sedaka, to create a kind of connection between the novels.

At the same time, we were still working on the edits of the second Alex Sedaka book (then called Accused) as well as talking back and forth about the third, which at that stage HarperCollins still wanted.

This latter was also turning into a big problem, because Kate thought that the story was too complicated.  Given that it had to fill 400-500 pages, I didn’t see things that way, but the trouble is that it is very hard to write an intelligible synopsis of such a long story in only a couple of pages. (My working outlines usually run to 10-20 pages!)  In this case, it was clear from Kate’s reaction that I had not summarized the story very clearly.

However, back to the main story.  The following day (i.e. 27/02/10) I revised the Mayan story – provisionally titled The Doomsday Labyrinth – and sent it to Diane, who in turn forwarded it to Kate.  I also suggested publishing it under the name Maurice Palmer.  This was a pun on Michael Caine, whose real name was Maurice Micklewhite and who played a character called “Harry Palmer” in three films based on Len Deighton cold war thrillers.

On the 4th of March, we got word back from Kate that she liked the Doomsday Labyrinth and was especially pleased with the title.  However it had to be looked at by others at HarperCollins (including Caroline, who heads the Avon list).   What the Avon team wanted was for me to introduce a strong female element, to play down the physics element and to play up the archaeology element.  The pragmatic solution, which I put to Diane to pass on to Kate, was to introduce a female archaeologist to work alongside (and sometimes against) the physicist.

This led to a revised synopsis on April the 6th, after a trip to Israel.  But at the same time, Diane and I were still pushing for the Moses book to be the second in the series – and that female archaeologist was going to surface again… albeit in a somewhat different form…